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Deanna ([personal profile] dr4b) wrote2002-10-02 04:20 pm
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A Wednesday Haiku

Damn, Minnesota,
Letting Oakland walk on you
Sucks ass. Please stop it.
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[identity profile] chaoticgoodnik.livejournal.com 2002-10-02 04:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I think it would sound better if the second line was "Letting Oakland wale on you".

(Link included because it looks like a misspelling.)
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