ext_12851 ([identity profile] miz-hatbox.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dr4b 2005-02-05 06:47 am (UTC)

Hee! That's brilliant!

...except (a small nit) I always thought that "'til the moon was lighting the pitch" meant the moon was shining down on the soccer field (aka the pitch), not that the moon was pitch-black.

I suppose you could say, "There's a night I hid by the moonlit pitch..."

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